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I feel for you, I know I feel for you
And words can't describe it
I simply can't hide from it

(A simple goodbye can't corrupt it)

As much as I try
As much as these tears
Fall when I cry
I Know I can't hide
From you!

I feel you, I feel you all around.
And you live in the air I breathe
And I can taste you in my sleep

(A wishful kiss on my cheek)

As much as I try
As much as these tears
Fall when I cry
I know that I can't hide
From you!

You are everywhere
( I feel. You. Everywhere)
You are everywhere
And
You have become everything
That I have ever come to know
(Everything)
(Everything that you are. I can't hide)

As hard as I try!
As much as I fight these tears
That fall when I cry!
I know, so well!
I can't hide from
From
You!
a song! oh my gosh! no way!
It's been far too long since the last one I wrote.

Anyways. It's streamlined. Straightforward. No sugar or added preservatives etc. etc.
It's blunt. Hopefully, you'll enjoy it anyways.

:)
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010   Writer
:hug:
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Twilightluvur15 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
i first read this and i was lkke, this would be a good song -.-'... well i guess u made it that way.

BUT i love it all the same!
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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:icontwilightluvur15:
Twilightluvur15 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
welcome welcome ^^
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HippieVan57 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
nicely done my friend!
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you man :)
It's good to hear from you again.
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HippieVan57 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
you're welcome :D
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TheDownpour Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Very emotional and creates a strong sense of angst and a sort of frantic desperation. A very good piece - I imagine it will have been quite therapeutic?
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
intention* lol.
Probably would help if my typing skills were better today. ^^;
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TheDownpour Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
It's fine :) I was just saying it seemed like it'd have been a therapeutic piece to write... and you're welcome :)
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