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Apart. Our own heart chambers far from,
Our voices, far from our laughter. We dream,
Consistently of motivating thoughts. keeping,
our eyes glued to those balls of light, we call stars.

Maybe someday. Maybe. You and I.

Maybe: Assumes distance through a heartfelt,
probability to make matters more alluring and less,
Sensitive. We don't cry, though we well up behind,
Dusty, still eyes.

One harsh jab to the heart. It'll break into. Pieces.

Reach. Let our hands reach for each other across,
The untouchable horizons before us. Miles between,
And we still know we long for each others unreachable,
Touch.

A simple caress. I'll know we made it.

Every day. It grows stronger. The connection wants to feed,
Every time we breathe, it speeds along time. In prayer of a better day.
A day where we can finally meet.

When we hear our voices sing. Not on the telephone.
Definitely a better piece. At least I think so. :)

I hope you all enjoy :heart:

This piece brought on a lot of sensitive emotions. :nod:
I feel this piece is better because it feels more heartfelt.


Constructive comments and feedback are welcome :heart:
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
Beautiful...
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underworldriver Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. It's one of my older pieces. :heart:
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
I wish my older pieces were that awesome.

By the ways... working on our zombie collab... I have to work on it.
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
alright awesome to hear that! get that collab going! ;)
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
Zombies... nom nom nom

Yes I shall.
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VK-Raevyn Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010
Wow. I really like it. It touches the deep emotion and the flow and style is really really good. Definatly worth the read.
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
wow, I really appreciate the kind comment and taking the time to read.
It means a lot. I am so glad you enjoyed.
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DarlingDisaster Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The layout is amazing and I'm wondering if you had chose it to begin with or if you just stopped and started where you felt it was appropriate?
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i honestly don't know myself. I just go with it. whatever happens happens. That's how my writing is a lot of the time.
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DarlingDisaster Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
well it works very well for you
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