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You complete me
I said one day
When you sang your songs to me
       I don't know how you could suddenly change to a minor key
            I thought what we had was the A major in the opening of the harmony
Flourishing the poetic hearts that make us, us'
            Feeding the mystery to our mindful lust
the way i write, the way you write songs, us
             I suppose now we are the glass that shattered the image
imagery of you and i being more than friends
             Perhaps its the mind making me think this nonsense?
I know you haven't forgotten me, but maybe the time that swept on by?
            Maybe time allowed its self to forget you and I?
In the end i will always remember what we shared
            I dream, still wishing this over and over again
Sacred memory...
You complete me
I said one day
When you sang your songs to me
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my whimsical mind and all of its glories. really doesn't come from any real experience. just came from a story i had in my mind.
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*Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 9, 2008, 6:42:06 PM
Hmmm... Well, I know that feeling too well...

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=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: May 9, 2008, 10:21:46 PM
thank you.

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=whydoidothiseveryday:iconwhydoidothiseveryday: May 10, 2008, 10:20:44 AM
it sounds like an experience as it was so detailed, well done for that :)
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=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: May 10, 2008, 10:23:06 AM
thank you very much :hug: :heart:

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have Rawem0tion* :blackrose:
*Heaven-CanWait:iconHeaven-CanWait: May 10, 2008, 11:55:58 AM
No real experience? Then you did a even greater job on its details!

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♥ yours eileen

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=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: May 10, 2008, 6:23:15 PM
yay! thank you so very much!

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have Rawem0tion* :blackrose:
*Ainohimitsu:iconAinohimitsu: May 12, 2008, 8:34:45 AM
Very beautiful and sorrowful. The imagery is excellent. And the structure is intriguing. A great piece. :)

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I've prayed for so long to see open skies/With a hope in my heart to finally feel alive~Meiun-Hanashite
=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: May 12, 2008, 9:52:11 AM
thank you, its a honor to hear this from you.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have Rawem0tion* :blackrose: