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When I’m with you I feel perfect
When I’m with you I feel great
And there is no one else in the world
That could ever take your place

For you are irreplaceable to me

Irreplaceable like my beating heart
For I breathe only for you
For you are a dream come true
From this day on may we never part

For you are my lost puzzle piece

And like a puzzle piece you complete me
And made me feel so whole
You opened my eyes that were narrow and closed
And gave me the ability to finally see

What true love actually is.

True love is like the setting sun
It's a masterpiece to behold
I am the art and you are the mold
Let us forever stay in love

For you are what true love really is

And I want your true love for life
I want it for forever and a day
Please love, promise to be forever mine
So that nothing shall ever take away

Your True Love.
A recent collaboration i did with :icontyc113:
I did the second and fourth verses. :heart:

It was a great time working with him.

Feel free to find this piece also on his page.
if you favorite this, please go ahead an give a favorite for him as well. :) [link]
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paintedbluerose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Writer
:aww: It's beautiful. I love the way it ends.
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Lady-Marjulie Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is superb.
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much :)
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SpaceShipEarth Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
Man that was a great read
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:) thank you.
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SpaceShipEarth Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
You are welcome
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ZanaQuinn Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the puzzle piece Stanza. I use that metaphor with my love all the time. ^.^
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: thank you :)
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paintedbluerose Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010  Student Writer
I love that line, you are my lost puzzle piece. :aww:
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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well-you-dont-say Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Professional Artist
so uplifting and beautiful. i feel like a perfect moment in time has been captured here
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010
Wow I'd like to do a collab with you sometime
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I would love to do one with you as well :)
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010
Well when do you have a free spot in your schedule?

And would you whether work in a poem of your style or a song of mine?
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'll let you know. And whatever we do is fine by me. :)
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
Okay.
Hmmm I'd like to work with your style.
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
alright, sounds good.
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:iconultimamage578:
UltimaMage578 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010
awesome
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TheSadPianist Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010
Very Beautiful. I'd like for someone as good as you to read my works as well
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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eclipse101ka Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010
Two words. Total Awesomeness. I love it. I shall fave both!
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:iconunderworldriver:
underworldriver Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Please do, we both would appreciate it. :)
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